Contained emotions gush out
breaking the barriers of future, present & past
I paint my life
with different strokes
blotching moments divine
emphasizing the dark,
ignoring the sublime
Crushed.. I blow away the dried rose
dead somewhere in the books of my past
Turning pages
find nothing
but stains smeared vast
Melting like a candle
awaiting the pain to pass
The flame flickering incandescent
absolutely "true to life"
I forget to realize my worth
Shards of broken heart, I collect
unable to shape them now
But awash of guilt and guile
Radiating a strength anew
Sands of my life now numbered
Freedom is what I seek
Let loose hell or wrath
Forgiveness to my accord
No more am I meek!!!
17 comments:
I luv dis one beyond infinity!!!! i cannot describe my appreciation fr dis!
I <3 dis one! dats it! period!
This is intense. I felt this one. Keep writing!!!
heyaa.. Followin ur blog hon..
Crushed.. I blow away the dried rose
Dead somewhere in the books of my past..
Lovely lines.. :p
keep rockin
excellllllent....
absolutely awesome... loved each n every line...
Sands of my life now numbered
Crushed.. I blow away the dried rose
dead somewhere in the books of my past
Turning pages
find nothing
but stains smeared vast
awesome lines...
@ Mav,
Thanks buddy..
@ AJ,
Thanks
@ Vasudha,
Hey thanks...
@ Arun,
Those are my fav lines as well... :)
WOW WOW WOW...
namaste my guru.. this was suuper! :)
@ Leo,
Hey thanks, buddy!
"Sands of my life now numbered
Freedom is what I seek
Let loose hell or wrath
Forgiveness to my accord
No more am I meek" ..........beautiful lines......reminds me of "arise, awake ....."
.........keep walking!!!
You continue to amaze me. This is really great!!
Sands of my life now numbered
Freedom is what I seek
Let loose hell or wrath
Forgiveness to my accord
No more am I meek!!!
I love these lines..
Keep em coming!!
Hmmmmmmmmm.... every post that inspires every other follower of this blog, leaves me in the depths of sorrow!!! My heart mourns with every word that hits my screen everytime I read one of ur posts!!! I dunno whether to revel in the beauty of the posts or wonder what is it that troubles u so!!!
@ Anorak,
Thanks for dropping by my blog.. Checked yours as well.. Really loved it.. Hoping to see you more often here :-)
@ Doncha,
*Smiles*, *Smiles*... I love it when the appreciation comes from you.. It means a lot....
@ Tabs,
Don't get troubled, not by this one atleast... This one is more an attempt to break free... from those gnawing feelings...
Serious, don't you find it a little moe optimisitc, this one ?
It's beautiful, rare and polished...! Keep it up!!!
Girl you do some poetry writing, don't you... Loved reading through.. Tell you the truth, I envy you...I also used to write poetry once -- but no more. Muse and me, we lost touch. And for good, it seems. :(
All the best..(mean it)
Love,
Ann Dee
@ Ann,
Firstly, welcome to my blog :)... M glad you liked my works and thanks for those wishes..
Hoping to see you more often here :)
Regards,
Z. Migzie
"Sands of my life now numbered
Freedom is what I seek
"
You give hope to live, and still feeling weak..i can imagine how broken the person is :)..lovely
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