A smile robbed somewhere
Tears ornament someone
Dreams crash somewhere
Loneliness marries someone
A heart breaks somewhere
Hurt triumphs someone
Trust broken somewhere
Love fails someone
Pain creeps in somewhere
Insecurity engulfs someone
Faith lost somewhere
Life defeats someone!!
And all you gotta say is
"I am sorry!!
Wish a Sorry could comfort someone........
14 comments:
awesome work....the truth of life properly garnered and strained into words in dis one.....ludv it so much! :)
"Wish a Sorry could comfort someone........" magnificent lines!
keep up da wonderful work! :)
@ Mav,
Thanks buddy...
Staggering! I am impressed! Very crafty; the style in expressing and bringing a sense of regret to the foreground. Well done! Keep writing!!!
@ AJ,
Thanks dude!!
Terrific yaar...! Everything's new incorporated in the poem...style...thoughts...disdaining love and our brutal treachery...Loved it!!!
some really painful truths written so beautifully !! loved the write :)
wowie...loved the poem...
great flow... very painful n kinda a cynical outlook on love... :-)
@ Krish,
Something straight from the heart is always appealing
@ Prats,
Pain it is..... Thanks dear
@ Arun,
A little cynical maybe..
Its a real pity, isn't it. The word 'sorry'. Its being thrown around so much, that when its meant with all your heart, with all that you got.... its still is reduced to nothing. Your pain might be too vast for a meagre 'sorry' to cover... but maybe even the sorry had a lot of pain behind it. Just a thot..
As always, i envy your blessing ... your gift of expression.
migzie,
beautiful yaar :)
teach me to write from the heart like this! :)
@ Leo,
Hehe... U have to be hurt badly to write like that... Y to go through all that trouble... Just be kewl.. the way you are :D
Very Cynical!!! In my dictionary this one does justice to the word "Love"
I like the continuous usage of somewhere.. someone.. in each stanza.
Keep Writing!!!
BTW I agree with anonymous, the word "Sorry" can also carry a lot of pain with it...
Are you broken heart now?
Chill yaar, Damn the care for those who don't care for you.
Listen to: Babuji Dheere chalna for a change...No, honestly, it is witty, humourous but all the same ludicrous.
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