"Girl, I cannot accept you"
'Why?'
"My priorities have changed. I cannot go against my family"
'Did you really love me?'
"Yes, ... I still love you and care for you.. "
'Care for me, thanks..'
"Girl, move on"
A tear rolls down...
He walks out... The door shut on me...
I have a new companion - Loneliness.... !!!
6 comments:
wow! real situation expressed wid such brutal straight forwardness... had da impact dat it was supposed to!
But den again I wonder...if u can let go nd move on so easily did u actually get together in the 1st place? wat about commitment?
I dunno....All i feel is think a thousand times b4 entering into sumthng but once der giv it ur whole heart nd don't back out! coz da oder person deserves dat!
Nice one! u neva fail to impress me Sheena! :)
@ Mav,
Thanks a ton buddy for those lovely thoughts...
I guess everyone thinks differently. Not everyone is lucky to have people who would think like you.. :D
nice story...
but i like u writing poems more than fiction...u bring out the emotions very well in ur poems...55 fiction limits u...
55 fiction...Loving that genre nowadays..
@ Arun,
Thanks machan.. I once want to try writing a prose with equal intensity.. I would when time permits..
Everyone does think differently...agree wid u on dat part!
Btw who's lucky???????
No one has me.......m da unlucky guy here!!!! :P :P :P :P
Sorry fr da sad joke! bt sadder reality behind it! :)
Wateva! da post rocks! \m/
i loved the ending migzie...
sad, but sometimes loneliness can be the best companion!
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