Our Conversations -
Seem like a fabricated script,
Words which fill our heart
Stay within, untouched,
Sighs dodge our hollow laughter
Silence makes the going tougher,
Emotions surfing high
Our true selves we deny,
An invisible wall, between us stands
Umm..s and Aaah..s surrounds,
We pretend
Hide feelings, a hundred
Now masters at deception
Our love defeated,
It lies somewhere... buried!
5 comments:
True.
Neatly penned
"Umm..s and Aaah..s surrounds" - Quite informal, quite natural - well done!!!
Keep writing!!!
I tld u already! Am a fan of ur blount in da face nd wonderful style of writing!
Here too u pen down a perennial reality wid such eloquence!
Very well done! luvd it!:)
@ Brosreview,
A consistent critic appreciating the good and pointing the bad, thank you.. It means a lot..
@ Mav,
I think it is more of a mutual admiration.. I fell head over heels on that post "Heartless autumn". I have no words to relay what I felt after reading that.. Thanks again..
wow! true!
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