The nature's hand splodging black ink
Over the tinted canvass
The disc of cool carved ice
surrounded by sparkling white diamonds
slowly melts its light
washing away the aggressions
The picturesque beauty
suddenly torn
the lightning striking ruefully
Clouds roar in
Clapping thunders on its way,
The world shivers...
The raven heart above (sky)
unable to hold its pain anymore
Inundate the world
with its mighty tears
Crumble down
Like an avalanche..
The trees, the flowers
the birds - all admirers
help ease away the pain
For,
The trees in their green attire
the flowers in a myriad colour
the birds offering their wishful prayer
Join in to take the sorrow away
Relieved from the pain
Tears wiped
A new dawn is awakened
Donning a pristine white gown
carrying renewed hope in the heart
Like a bride
Awaiting a new start!!
8 comments:
Awesome! *Claps*
Lovely way of expressing it! I loved it! You are becoming one of my fav poetess hun! Beautifully written!
Yippppppeeeee!!!
That's what I call a compliment from the great writer/ poetess herself!!
*Bows* Thank you!!
Things are brightening up? Beautiful!!
@ Salil,
Thought I need a break from the pain and sorrow....
There is nothing wrong in portraying a bright picture to the world... irrespective of what I may feel inside....!
Brilliant description of a rainy night transforming into a beautiful day!
luvd dis one! Optimistic! :)
Great imagery here! Nicely written! Very well-described, this one.
I like the subtext in this one very much. Very optimistic! Good on you!!! Probably, your best works. Now, keep at it.
Keep writing!!!
@ Mav,
Thanks buddy, yes it is optimistic
@ Brosreview
Yep, even I liked the imagery here :D
very much optimistic, but i wont call it ur best post of all :) i loved another poem better! :)
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