Walk away with another girl!
Giggles of your laughter resounding,
Love so overwhelming,
I watch,
My heart pounding..
Happiness.. Din't I deserve?
Pangs of jealousy, corrupt me
Self - pity gets the better of me
Then..
I realize
It was never meant to be...........
I whisper
A silent prayer
"The couple be blessed forever"
9 comments:
it was poignant n noble.a brilliant post!
nice lyrics...n a dignified theme..
i luv these short n sweet poems...
jus now goin thro ur blog...
@ Anwesa,
Thanks for dropping by girl..
@ Arun,
Hope you enjoy the journey of my blog :) Yes even I prefer short & sweet poems.. But talent comes in all sizes, watse?? ;)
fifty five fiction in a poem? :O
wow re very innovative! :)
@ Leo,
Thanks dear.. As I already mentioned, glad that you liked
Forgiving is the hardest reaction to convey sometimes. But, always the noble one. Precise and to the point avoiding the otherwise clichéd lengthy drama.
Good work!!! Keep them coming!!!
Perhaps, I could direct you to one of my songs. Please visit my blog and have a read of "Forgive to Forget". Let me know what you think. Thanks in advance.
@ Brosreview,
Kinda caught up now with work, so just come online for posting.. But next week would be a little more at ease..
Will definitely check out!!
And Yes thanks... :)
nice poem
simple theme yet effectively delivered.
wishes..
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