Hope that you once gave me,
that which now snaps -
with every broken promise,
with every shattered dream,
with that unbroken silence
Our relationship threadbare..
what remains... is a strand -
that which binds the remnants of our past
This snaps.. the love in me will breathe its last!!
5 comments:
Decently strong! Keep at it.
Luvly usage of words...U hav a style...in ur face kinda....awesome work...I likd da description of da bond deteriorating into nothingness nd of love dying!
Beautiful!
luvd it! :)
@ Mav,
And that is too painful.... even after years it hurts you..
To a third person I might come across as a fool, holding onto nothing.. But it mattered..and the love is real...
Too senti isn't it.. Naah m kewl!!!
@ Sheena
I can relate to da hurt!
So I knw! Well nd about it being too sentimental...well who cares...its our sentiments dat make us poets....dat help us pen down our thoughts!!!
So dats completely ok!
omg! this is strong!
sheena is doing great! :)
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