Stealthily you tiptoe in my heart
Without a warning, without a thought
Emotions, surreal did exist
Slowly found them difficult to resist
Emotions awakened by you.....
You colour my world,
a different hue
The landscape of my life,
depicting only you
Your love as mesmerizing
As a bride behind the veil
Pure and rare
as a blue sapphire
As pristine
as the snow clad mountains..
I readily drown
in the depth of your eyes
where love in abundance lies
A flame flickers somewhere
Engulfed we remain
In the arms of the moment..
Words vapourize
Our breathing heavy, in a daze
the forbidden love tingles our spine
like tulip glass laced with a drop of wine..
I steal a mysterious smile
Allow myself to float, for a while
A glint escaping
like a diamond, sparkling..
The gentle breeze
blowing softly through the leaves
carry these treasured memoirs...
with eternal ease..
And I awake from my reverie!!!
Tuesday, May 19, 2009
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6 comments:
A decent effort. Keep writing!!!
seuureal n dreamy...loved the lines..
Drown in the depth of your eyes...
where love in abundance lies...
Once again excellent work...now u wanted me to point out sumthng....here it is....not a mistake i guess its a typo...
*As pristine
as the snow "cloud" mountains..*
I guess dat should be snow clad mountains!
I mean i guessed if u meant it as snow cloud mountains den its fair enough! :)
Now about da poem....wonderfully described....dis one is different...descriptive nd marvellous @ dat!
*Words vapourize
Our breathing heavy, in a daze
the forbidden love tingles our spine
like tulip glass laced with a drop of wine..*
Beautiful words!!!!
:)
Luvd ur work as always!!!! *bows*
@ Brosreview,
I know this is not as rocking.. But feels good that your comments still pour in..
@ Arun,
Its nothing but a dream.. Reality is not as lovely as this..
@ Mav,
Yes Monsiuer, it is typo.. Thanks for bringing it my notice..
It is different I guess becos it is not dark and sad.. But the ending still is.. coz its just a dream :(
Those are my fav lines too :) :)
"Bows" to you dude!!
its complex and weird and ofcoure bful..keep writing ..will wait fr more
i found it brilliant! :)
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