Liquefy
that which is metamorphosed
Cast away
that which was worthless
Silence
that eternal turbulence
Drown
that naked reality
Crumble
that frozen illusion
Strip off
memories of those fragile bygones
Now.....
Awaken
that which lies in slumber
Usher
the fragrance of wet earth
Sing
to the solitude of tranquil
Raise a toast
to the new beginning.......
Celebrate
.................... a victory called Life!!
17 comments:
wow now dat was awesome....I lik da way ur poems hav a different form...and yet still dey hav da flow where ideas seem to queue about lik clockwork.......
dis one was lovely.....optimistic nd good!
Likd it! :)
@ Mav,
Yeah swerving from the pessimism to optimism... Hope it lasts :)
It's tremendous: the rhythm, rhyme and reality.
Some worthy quotes:
Silence
that eternal turbulence...
Awaken
that which lies in slumber...
Hope you continue with the bangs, pal!
Best Wishes,
Me
Me too hope this lasts da! .. Really really really beautiful... Read it and loved it.. .. so read it again :):)
Indeed, a new beginning for the lead here. Fantastic! You are on a roll girl! Keep at it!
@ Krish,
M honoured that you are following my blog... :D
and so am I with your words of encouragement!!
@ AJ,
As I said, hope it lasts ;)
@ Anonymous,
I wonder why you need a veil of "anonymous identity" while commenting here..
And I thought you had decided to abolish reading my blog.. What brings you here?
excellent write...
kinda reassuring n revolting...
@ Arun,
Actually more revolting than reassuring - to be honest... :)
One of your best works in optimism! Loved it
@ Ms. R,
Long time since you came here.. Really appreciate it!! Thanks, glad you liked it!
I'm sorry babe. Have been a bit caught up but no more :D
wonderful.. honey out of the rock
it was expressive... reminded me of an old poem... a blogpal had told me "expressions expressions, how do u master them?" :)
now after this poem, i think i have to ask you that question too! it was fantastic and very much a different style...
moving from pessimism to optimism, the way u shd be looking at life... loved it such a lot...
keep at it.. u r on a roll! :)
MMmmmmmmm... I am lovin this... Tis is my fav post!!!!
Optimistic!! This one is splendid. Very very refreshing!!
wow, touche :)
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